文 / 长木云伊
One major problem for many Chinese college students is that they do not
have a very motivational and positive studying atmosphere, in which
students can proactively discuss academic topics and experiences,
collaborate actively, and help one another with difficulties and
confusions. Therefore, I want to invent a network to solve this problem
and make it easier for college students to study collaboratively.
Two years after announcing strict volunteer requirements for the Tokyo
2020 Olympics and realizing they could not get enough help for free, the
Japanese ministry has instead turned to universities and their vast
human resources, going so far as to altering curriculum schedules for
those willing to assist.
S1-1 Communication skills is important here in our university.
S1-2 Communication service component is important for education in our
S1-3 Communication service is important component for education in our
S1-4 Community service is important component education in our
S1-5 Community service is important component education here in our
A number of reasons can account for this problem, but in my opinion,
there are three major reasons. For starters, secondary education in
China does not particularly encourage students to discuss and
collaborate, as its main goal is to prepare students for competing in
Gaokao. The result is that most middle school graduates do not have the
habit and the ability to seek discussion and collaboration, which are
vital to success in higher education. What’s more, with an expansion of
student numbers in universities, class sizes are also increasingly
large. Subsequently, it is hard for professors to organize and ignite
discussions and debates in class, and students don’t have enough
opportunities to practice academic discussions and collaborations.
Additionally, in recent years, college students spend a large amount of
time on social media, such as QQ, WeChat and Weibo, which are mostly
filled with entertainment contents with little space for academic
Community service is an important component of education here at our
In order to solve the problem, I believe that college students need a
new network with an easy-to-use app that enables them to seek
discussions and collaborations with peers who are equally curious and
In the latest move to entice students to volunteer for the Olympics, a
large number of universities have begun to offer academic credits as a
form of remuneration. According to broadcasting corporation NHK’s
survey, 49 percent of universities in Tokyo — both national and private
— are now considering that option.
S2-1 We encourage each student to entity one …
S2-2 We encourage all students to participate in one community actity
before they graducate.
S2-3 We encourage all students to volunteer at least one community
actity before graducate.
S2-4 We encourage all students to volunteer at least one community
activity before they graduate.
To begin with, there need to be critical regulations to make sure this
network works as expected. It is only open to college students, required
to use real names so that it will make a friendly and comfortable
environment without spams or abusive language. By employing advanced AI
system, this network only allows users to post topics that are relevant
to academic studies and future careers.
We encourage all students to volunteer for at least one community
activity before they graduate.
There are at least two features in this network. Firstly, if a student
is interested in an academic topic, or has a feasible learning or
research plan, she can write a post with her ideas and questions to seek
collaboration or group work. She can list the characteristics of her
ideal collaborators and even conduct interviews for students who are
interested, which will also help students to practice skills of
conducting and attending interviews. It follows that students can look
for the various projects they want to participate in.
S3-1 There is such a volunteer programme called one and one.
S3-2 Community service is such a volunteer program thousands of student
S3-3 New community program is called one and one which elementary
students falling behind.
S3-4 New community program called one and one elemtnrary students fall
S3-5 A new community program called one and one thousands elementary
students are falling behind.
Secondly, the network also provides a payment system for students who
face difficulties in learning and need to seek help and tutoring, and
those who want to share their knowledge and make some money. Students
who are capable of and love sharing or teaching can even organize a
tutoring class, since it is said that the best way to learn something is
by teaching it.
A new community program called “One On One” helps elementary students
who’ve fallen behind.
students。落后的小学生，elementary students who’ve fallen behind.
Furthermore, this network could consist of most universities in China.
Students across the country can catch up with trends and activities in
other universities. There can be collaborations and competitions across
S4-1 Your academic degree may help, English.
S4-2 Your educational degree may interest in it because you can teach
touter, math and English.
S4-3 Your education degree may interest in because you can do some
teaching, math and English.
S4-5 Your education majors may interest it because it provides some
opportunities to teach tutor, math and English.
S4-6 Your education majors may specially interest in it because it
provides some opportunities to do some teaching such as tutor, math and
S4-7 Your education majors may specially interest in it because it
provides some opportunities to do some teaching, that is tutoring, math
In summary, I believe that an easy-to-use academic social network will
greatly improve the studying atmospheres in Chinese universities.
Students across the country would enjoy a reliable network, providing
them more opportunities to study proactively and collaboratively.
Your education majors might be especially interested in it because it
offers the opportunity to do some teaching, that is, tutoring in math
S5-1 …needs two hours a week for a semester.
S5-2 Volunteers need two hours once a week for a semester.
S5-3 Volunteers need two hours a week for once a semester.
S5-4 Here volunteer needs two hours a week for once a semester.
You’d have to volunteer two hours a week for one semester.
In order to graduate, university students must achieve a set amount of
S6-1 You can choose math, English or both.
S6-2 You can choose that to help child math, English or both.
S6-3 You can choose that to help with child, math English or both.
S6-4 You can choose that to help child with math, English or both.
You can choose to help a child with math, English, or both.